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名师点评网友BEC初级作文(2)

Source: 恒星英语学习网  Onion  2010-05-13  我要投稿   论坛   Favorite  


网友作文三:

memorandum
to : all the staff
from : jeremy
subjuect : new somking policy
do you have a feeling that our office is surrounding by smog all the day, [1]so we will implemented a[2] new policy for somking ,from next week[3] ,we will open an area[4] for the smoking ,and other area is rescricting to smoke ,also there is a punishment when we find you smoke in these area [5]
thank you

名师指导:
[1]去掉来
[2]we will implement a
[3]Next Monday
[4]在哪里啊?
[5]关于惩罚,最好不提。
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