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雅思写作:学会融会贯通

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  以“男女特点不同”反对女性参军,可写:

  Deemed as passive , caring and gentle, females could hardly fit in themasculine, aggressive and cold-blooded battlefield not only physically but alsomentally.

  以“男女平等”支持女性参军,可写:

  With the increasingly improved sexual equality in all walks of life , ithas been an inevitable trend that women are entitled to serve in the army .

  以“男女平等”反对女性参军,可写:

  It is understandable that to tear down the sex discrimination means morefreedom and options rather than compulsory military service for the women.

  第三个自然段还可探讨部队存在的目的,To build up the defensive ability of the country is theoriginal intention of the military service.

  女性参军的支持者可写,

  Complementing their male counterparts, females would help enhance theoverall efficiency and morale of the army ,thus sharpening the edge of themilitary .

  反对者则可以:

  Highly effective maneuvering and operating is the key to success formilitary force, which is hard to secure since recruiting female soldiers wouldinduce more discriminated and complex rules , regulations and sometimes evencompromises.

  再根据我们课堂上的论证手法充实一些例子,细节,对比点,富于个性,言之有物的百变作文,就由你自己亲手完成啦。


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