七、必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。
例如：
(9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likestheir delicacy, he likes their vivacity,and he likes their silence.
(10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split thesurf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowedthrough nameless valleys and nameless bays.
八、尽量用主动说态，因此(11b)比(11a)好：
(11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.
(11b) A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.
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九、适当时候，可用倒装句和平行句，如：
(12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here, inthe centre of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.
(13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.
(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remainsilent.