Describe about when a time a friend or a family member helped you in the past. Describe how the person helped you then explain why this was important to you.
Tip
1. Problem/ difficulty/ challenge
(1.1) Failed exam; relationship problems
2. Who, and who this person helped you
(2.1) Talk/ spend time together/ buy books to prepare for make up exam
3. What was the result
I still remember when I took the TOEFL exam for the first time, my mark was awful, I totally lost confident in doing a good job on the test. My dad was the person that helped me through the tough time. First, instead of blaming or punishing me, he spent a lot of time to find out what my problems were and how I could improve. Next, he bought me many useful books to prepare for the test. There were many sample questions and useful sample responses in the books. Also, there were practice tests in the books that I could use to sharpen my skills. Because of his support, I’m confident that I can do a better job this time around.