Some people think that family members are the most important influence on young adults, others believe that friends are the most important influence. Which do you agree with? Explain why.
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1. Family influence
(1.1) Most caring people round a child
(1.2) Unconditional love
(1.3) Parents can teach children that their friends can’t
2. Friend influence
(2.1) Same age, same taste
(2.2) Spend most of the time together, at and after school
(2.3) Better communication, friends don’t judge as much as parents
(2.4) Kids share more problems and secrets with friends
I think that family members are the most important influence of young adults. The person that influenced me the most is my mom. she is a good listener who always pays attention to what I have to say, that makes her the person who knows me the best in our family, I have no secret in front of her. And also, she has a good manner. I’ve learned from her how to treat others around me with dignity and respect since I was young, thanks to her I made many friends in my life. Most friends at my age aren’t mature enough to teach me qualities like these.